Sunday Photo Fiction – May 15 2016


Sunday Photo Fiction  The idea of Sunday Photo Fiction is to create a story / poem or something using around about 200 words with the photo as a guide.

Sunday Photo Fiction – Skiing Tragedy

The sky was clouding up quickly it was only a couple of hours since it had stopped snowing and the sun shone through the clouds.

All in the ski resort on the mountain had been waiting for the clearing and where already enjoying the trip up the mountain with their skis, to try out the new fall of snow before it got soft on the top with the sun shining.

Within five minutes the sun had gone and it was very close to snowing again.

So many humans on the mountain it wasn’t a safe scene as it was mainly beginners and some were not very experienced with skiing.

Everyone had the same idea, get off the snow as it started to fall heavy again, the ones in the ski lift where all good as that would return back to the bottom again, but the ones going down the range where being a little careless.

Sure enough, there was a collision of half a dozen skiers, medicate help was needed, with stretchers to carry two off the mountain slope with broken bones to a waiting helicopter.



  1. Skiing can be dangerous, lol. Just to say you’ve used “where” instead of “were” a few times i.e. “where being a little careless”. Also think you need some more punctuation to break long sentences up a bit. Thanks for posting 🙂

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