Frank Tassone Haika Challenge #16 Freedom – Haibun
Frank say’s write the haika poem of your choice (haiku, senryu, tanka, haibun, renga/renku, haiga, etc.) in which you name or reference freedom
Beauty of Freedom
I have been fighting for freedom all my life. I’m neither smart nor stupid, but I have discovered who I am and I’m free.
because of my pain
I now feel the happiness
beauty of freedom
Also written for #ForgivingFridays
Powerful.
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Thanks for the nice comment, hope you are having a wonderful week.
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You’re welcome, Elsie. My week is going well. Hope you are also having a good week.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #10: Kiwinana’s latest #haibun for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thanks so much for participating in my #Haikai Challenge! 🙂
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Oh Elsie, I am so touched! Thank you for contributing this haikai for Forgiving Fridays. You are reminding me of a workshop I led last year on making peace with ourselves, and how the very thing we judge is the key to making peace inside. You are amazing and so creative. I’ll share this post in my blog this Friday. Blessings to you, Elsie! 🙂 Love Debbie
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Beautiful and powerful haiku 🙂
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Thanks for the nice comment. I appreciate it very much.
Hope you are having a great week. Peace.
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Beautuful! It is difficult to ignore or bypass pain, and hence, it becomes the springboard to evolution.
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Hi Elsie, I saw a link to this post my current challenge’s Mister Linky? Did you repost it there by mistake? Feel free to repost using the kigo for this week’s challenge. Thanks! 🙂
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I think I posted last weeks “freedom” on this week “Hawk” by mistake, I will write this week now and repost it. Sorry.
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No worries, Elsie! Post whenever you like. I’ll delete your errant entry. 🙂
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Don’t delete my #16 Freedom post for last week, I’m confused, I’m writing one for #17 Hawk now, will post later.
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I know. I left your link to the week 16 challenge (freedom). I only deleted your duplicate in today’s challenge (hawk). No worries.
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Splendid! This was a superb piece indeed.
because of my pain
I now feel the happiness
beauty of freedom
So deep and beautiful!
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Thanks, Vandana, appreciated your kind comment.
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My pleasure 🙂
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