#NaPoWriMo or #GloPoWriMo – Day 13 – Alone


#NaPoWriMo or #GloPoWriMo – Day 13 – Alone

Thank you Suzanne Olivante for the NaPoWriMo Photo Daily Poetry Prompt

Crowded Mall alone

walking in a crowded mall of people
so many strange humans around me
wondering where they are going
hope I find an exit soon
at least, someone, I know
hardly controlling
panic within
tears are close
please help

Reverse Etheree Poetry Syllabic Pattern: 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1, rhyme none.




  1. The picture threw me. It is more than being alone in a supermarket. It is like being in a dark and menacing other world.
    Your lovely poem made me want to say; shall we find a cosy cafe whilst figuring it out.

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  2. Your poem definitely prompted me to have a plethora of thoughts. The mall image certainly does look foreboding. When things look dark and sound unfamiliar, I suspect most of us might feel a bit out of sorts. If we can exit these blinding fears, the door to freedom will soon appear!

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