What Do You See? Sept/18/2018 – Mosaic of Life

What do you see

What Do You See? Sept/18/2018 – Mosaic of Life

#10 Lined Poetry

Join in with Helene at Willow Poetry and write a short story, poem, or whatever, please use the above link.

Mosaic of Life

Mosaic mural of faces and living
I can see happiness and laughter
Magnify by those tiny squares
the beauty of mixed humans
In their own home township
memorable fine day
faces smiling
full of fun

Reverse Etheree Poetry – Syllabic Pattern: 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1, Rhyme: None.



    • Thanks, I enjoy writing poetry, there are so many forms you can write, rhyming is an interesting challenge, with your artwork you already have a poem you can write, I usually write using an image. Have a great day.

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  1. Your poem describes what I see also. I have tried to see what someone else might see. Fear, chaos, smothering crowds, diversity? I would like to see some other submissions. My mother would probably not have liked it. She was a country person who loved her space. 😀

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    • Thanks for the nice comment. Appreciate it. I agree they do like sad, but I suppose that’s life. I wonder what caused them to look like that, we like seeing smiling faces, don’t we. Have a great day.


  2. hi there Kiwiana ,i’m a long time reader of your blog 😁i enjoy reading your poetry ,this one was particularly delightful and i loved the structure. kindest regards kiwibg 🙂😎🙂

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