IWH Haiku Challenge #4 – New Born
newborn infant child
resting beside aged mother
warmth a must always
Copyright © 2019 Elsie Hagley.
This is a Human Haiku Poem
What is the Difference between Haiku/Senryu Poetry?
Here is an in-depth description of English Haiku/Senryu Poetry (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.
Lovely, Elsie 🙂
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Thanks Susi, all the best for a warm peaceful weekend.
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You’re welcome. And for you the same! 😦
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Small keyboard, large fingers! I meant 🙂
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the poem and picture go so well together. love this!
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Egon Schiele, a little creepy. Haiku, wonderful.
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Thanks for your comment, hope you are keeping warm my friend.
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I am thanks. Not too cold where I am.
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Your timing is uncanny! I was recently able to hold my newly born niece and this poem is a treat! Big thank you for this, it lifted my day. 🙂
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Congratulations, so pleased it lifted your day. All the best for a peaceful warm weekend.
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Thank you for the striking photo and invite for haiku/senryu. Here is my response:
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Noice one. Actually this isn’t my challenge, Here is the link, https://iwriteher.com/2019/01/29/i-write-her-weekly-haiku-challenge-4/Please add your post. Have a peaceful happy weekend.
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Thanks Kiwinana. It was through your introduction to visit another beautiful blog.
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You have done a great haiku for the photo Elsie. Absolutely lovely.
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Beautiful. A whole lot said in a few words.
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