Carpe Diem #1599 Tan Renga Challenge – Early Morning Garden
My response to Carpe Diem #1599 Tan Renga Challenge – February 2019 (3.)
garden at sunrise
shadows erased by first rays
sunflowers turning © Ken Gierke (RivrVlogr)
while roses warm in the sun
chilled by late spring morning dew © 2019 Elsie Hagley
What is a Tan Renga Poetry?
One poet writes the first stanza, which is three lines long 5-7-5 a total of seventeen syllables. Structure as a haiku. The next poet adds the stanza, a couplet with seven syllables per line.
Very nice, kiwi. Such evocative writing!
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This offers a nice contrast in colors.
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A very interesting format Elsie, and the both of you have combined well to produce an excellent “Tan Renga Poem”
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Thanks Ivor, I appreciate your kind comment. Hope you are keeping cool, have a great day.
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A wonderful touch in this Tan Renga completion Elsie. I love the contrast of colors in both parts of this Tan Renga. Thank you.
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Such Beautiful scenes, Elsie. (@—>—)
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