Tanka Poetry – Easter & Temptations
luscious temptations
holidays, diet relapse
stomach takes over
easter comes but once a year
leave room for a hot cross bun
Tanka Poetry – consists of five units, usually with the following pattern of – 5-7-5-7-7 which is syllables.
The first three lines (5/7/5) are the upper phase. This upper stage is where you create an image in your reader’s mind.
The last two lines (7/7) of a Tanka poem are called the lower phase. The final two lines should express the poet’s ideas about the image that was created in the three lines above.
Your tanka made me hungry as did the picture too.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂 i have never had one of those but they look amazing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I know those treats well, ..to well… I’l try not to lower the bucket, in the well….
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice and cute tanka and such an apt picture of awesome buns.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hello stranger! How are you doing? My mom used to make hot cross buns! Hope you are well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes I’m a stranger, I have lost interest in my blog at the moment, I don’t seem to have the energy to do anything with it. So I will leave it alone for a while. Hope all is well with you my friend. Happy days.
LikeLike
Love your Tanka to the hot cross bun.
Where I come from we have another. It is called – Selma – it is filled in the middle with almond mass and whipped cream. Mmmm …..
miriam
LikeLiked by 1 person
Amen to that!
LikeLiked by 1 person