We love haiku and we all agree on its beauty, but maybe we can improve the beauty of haiku
APOKOINOU
What is Apokoinou?
In linguistics, an apo koinou construction /æpəˈkɔɪnuː/ is a blend of two clauses through a lexical word which has two syntactical functions, one in each of the blended clauses. The clauses are connected asyndetically.
Usually the word common to both sentences is a predicative or an object in the first sentence and a subject in the second one.
I think you all understand this “apokoinou” technique, it’s a nice technique to use in our haiku.
An example:
skating in the moonlight
after the dispute
the sound of windmills
© Yasuomi Koganei
Let us “break” this haiku with “apokoinou”:
“skating in the moonlight after the dispute” and “after the dispute the sound of windmills”. Isn’t it an awesome technique?
Here is my attempt at this new Challenge of Chevrefeuille
sun shinning over the ridge
warming the still air
after the snow storm
“sun shinning over the ridge warming the still air”. “warming the still air after the snow storm”.
Written for Carpe Diem – Exploring The Beauty Of Haiku.
Omg! Where have you been?? Are you alright??
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I’m fine, it’s been a hard year, we didn’t sell the farm, now we are back working the farm travelling some seventy kms most days, trying to get the farm back as it was four years ago, we will never lease the farm again. Hope you are well, have a great day.
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I’m fine. I missed you.
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Its an interesting technique. Am going to try it out too. Beautiful haiku!
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Thanks for your comment, it is interesting, it’s always nice to find new ways to write haiku. Cheers.
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I can’t even begin to speak to haiku, but it’s good to see you back!
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Thanks, it’s nice to be back with my old friends.
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Good to see you again.
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Thanks, very cold morning in Taranaki, fresh snow on the mountain, stay cozy my friend.
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Thank you We’re managing.
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Nicely done! 🙂 ❤
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Very nicely done, Elsie!
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Thanks, I liked your haiku, it felt like summer as I read it, sure could do with it here.
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Well done.
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Thanks, my friend, have a nice day.
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Hi Elsie…it’s been awhile 🙂 Interesting how you write about winter and i write about summer…there’s beauty in both!
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For sure, but I refer Summer, I can tolerate the heat but not the cold. Cheers fr summer!
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Very nice response on this special Haiku Writing Technique. Lovely haiku. Thank you for sharing.
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